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This is so precise and profound....food for thought. Thanks for stopping by; glad you liked the poem. Nita.

posted by Nita09 on January 10, 2009 at 10:12 AM | link to this | reply

ash, aspiring to greater things should be our life long ambition...
if we ever give up, life becomes a meaningless venture of boredom...

posted by Rumor on January 10, 2009 at 9:13 AM | link to this | reply

Percise wisdom...my friend well done!

posted by Wigopa_ on January 9, 2009 at 9:59 AM | link to this | reply

Amen! I wish this were understood world wide! sam

posted by sam444 on January 9, 2009 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

short and sharp!
poetry and impact pared down to a sleek elegance - well done!

posted by lionreign on January 9, 2009 at 7:01 AM | link to this | reply

Short and to the very important point Ash.......
well said; many blessings and thanks my friend

posted by mariaki on January 9, 2009 at 3:31 AM | link to this | reply

Someone in Kansas City, yesterday, had the "distinction" of being the city's first murder victim for the New Year 2009.   Too bad he doesn't know he made the news.  I wonder what aspirations the unknown murderer has for the remaining part of the year.   I have a feeling it will only get worse from here.

posted by TAPS. on January 9, 2009 at 12:47 AM | link to this | reply

Obliterate evil and be free! Evil is the root of all problems! But, it must be done within first!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on January 8, 2009 at 10:19 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Star5_ on January 8, 2009 at 8:10 PM | link to this | reply

simple and elegant and wonderful

posted by hazel_st_cricket on January 8, 2009 at 7:29 PM | link to this | reply

Interesting take on aspirations though I sadly see some people with the wrong aspirations all the time.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 8, 2009 at 5:03 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent observation

posted by skye08 on January 8, 2009 at 4:21 PM | link to this | reply

Yes Ash-in the hopes that we will have LEARNED something!(Ref;your comment)
Well done.Chris.

posted by Scramble on January 8, 2009 at 12:54 PM | link to this | reply

Hmmm
I suppose that all depends on one's inherent sensiblities.  Some people's aspirations do indeed kill...

posted by calia14 on January 8, 2009 at 12:03 PM | link to this | reply

That is why God sends each one of us here...
and though some us go astray at times, He always welcomes us back with open arms! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on January 8, 2009 at 11:51 AM | link to this | reply