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With your beautifully loving sentiments you have brought the dead poet alive. You delineated the sad undertone exquisitely, princess xoxoxo
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on January 12, 2009 at 8:24 PM
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Fabulous Poem
. Thanks for the read.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on January 12, 2009 at 7:32 PM
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Sinome
This is very special for me my lovin' friend, I really connected with:
"They buried him in a tomb without a name
with many others that were also dead
not knowing he would always be alive
in the minds that he'd fed...."
When I was living alone for over 7 years I used to pray for death after my wife died, and all that kept me going were the bloggers like yourself that fed my mind. How beautiful your work is luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 12, 2009 at 6:12 PM
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Excellent and very moving tribute to "The poet". Your poetry is always amazing and enjoyable.
posted by
yellowrose55
on January 12, 2009 at 12:54 PM
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This sounds like an ode to an unknown, unsung and neglected poet. The theme is very close to my heart and I found it very touching. There are many poets who have not achieved fame but have written immortal lines. I have discovered quite a few among Urdu poets and try to project them whenever it is possible.
posted by
hardilaziz
on January 12, 2009 at 8:03 AM
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What a beautiful poem. When the stars come out tonight, I'll look for the poet and send him a silent salute. All the best for the coming days, my dear. I hope it goes well and I'll see you when you are ok.
posted by
vogue
on January 12, 2009 at 7:04 AM
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Beautiful
and very, very comforting
posted by
malcolm
on January 12, 2009 at 5:52 AM
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An amazing story my dear Sinome and certainly food for thought;
nobody knows what goes in behind closed doors which is why we shouldn't be quick to judge anyone; very well written my friend - I was totally ensnared in this tale! Many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on January 12, 2009 at 4:27 AM
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I think he lives in all true poets! An awesome concept and wonderful delivery! I will be thinking of you tomorrow my darlin' friend! All my love to you too! sammy xoxoxoxxo
posted by
sam444
on January 11, 2009 at 8:38 PM
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nice poem, I would to have his talent but not die without a tombstone
posted by
Lanetay
on January 11, 2009 at 7:11 PM
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so sweet!
posted by
Star5_
on January 11, 2009 at 6:34 PM
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This is a wow poem Marta .It is inspirational to a poet and reader alike. Awesome in content and intent. Kudos!
posted by
merkie
on January 11, 2009 at 6:02 PM
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That's quite a tale, Sinome.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 11, 2009 at 4:06 PM
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There is so much more behind people than what we see outside.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 11, 2009 at 3:32 PM
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Evocative
posted by
Azur
on January 11, 2009 at 12:59 PM
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Agreed
You certianly have brought this person to life with stunning insight!!!!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 11, 2009 at 12:12 PM
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Extraordinary!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on January 11, 2009 at 11:16 AM
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Really, Really Beautiful
his words will live forever.
posted by
skye08
on January 11, 2009 at 11:08 AM
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Sinome
The same question Metalrat asked came to mind – but regardless if the man is real or a product of your poetic license, you most certainly brought him to life.
posted by
Troosha
on January 11, 2009 at 9:47 AM
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Beautiful poem as always...
...but, is this person real or allegorical?
posted by
metalrat
on January 11, 2009 at 9:39 AM
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Poignant
and beautiful
Geraldine
posted by
pernesegirl1
on January 11, 2009 at 9:17 AM
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Very beautiful poem, Sinome....awesome
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on January 11, 2009 at 9:06 AM
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