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Re: Re: Re: Re: Very smoothe read!
lol, experts!
Not I darlin, I don't know the first thing about it! Merkie gave me the rules for the form and I tried my best to follow them.
posted by
calia14
on January 26, 2009 at 8:12 AM
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Re: Re: Re: Very smoothe read!
Thank you...you know, I kind of suck at form... sometimes, I'll try starting out that way, but get lost along the road! I'll leave form to you experts!!! Thanks so much for responding!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 26, 2009 at 5:00 AM
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Re: Re: Very smoothe read!
That was weird, it decided to post in the middle of my typing! I was gonna say you should try the calliope form, it's unique! Merkie sent the rules to my e-mail.
posted by
calia14
on January 23, 2009 at 4:57 PM
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Re: Very smoothe read!
Thanks so much! The rules for this form are strict, but they create a very nice effect. You
posted by
calia14
on January 23, 2009 at 4:56 PM
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Very smoothe read!
Very pretty... I loved reading this one out loud... it's so gentle and easy on the tongue! Great execution!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 23, 2009 at 1:40 PM
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Heartfelt and elegantly stated Calia... Excellent work!
posted by
Sinome
on January 15, 2009 at 10:22 PM
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Re: formerstudentintern
Not a day goes by that I don't see the path the way that it could've gone if I chose to stay in my hometown, with my family and my friends, living the mostly comfortable humdrum life that I had always known. I chose to come to Florida instead; my boyfriend had made a mistake, had knocked up a girl he didn't love right before he moved away, only finding out after he had been away for a while. He had to come back, to do right by his daughter when she was born, and I chose to come with him and stay by his side. Almost six years later, here we are, married and getting his daughter for holidays and some weekends. I love it here, I didn't much like the cold and snow, but I miss my family and friends. It's complicated.
posted by
calia14
on January 15, 2009 at 9:47 PM
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I cannot imagine being away from family or anyone I love for a long time. I think absence can make the heart grow weary.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 15, 2009 at 8:14 PM
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Poignant and lovely work, Calia!
Great form too!...
posted by
Katray2
on January 15, 2009 at 7:25 PM
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Calia 14
Well done luv, very expressive
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 15, 2009 at 7:23 PM
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BEAUTIFUL !!!
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on January 15, 2009 at 6:35 PM
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cooooooool.....
posted by
Star5_
on January 15, 2009 at 5:51 PM
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Thanks, all!
posted by
calia14
on January 15, 2009 at 5:29 PM
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It would be impossible
not to relate to such a universal feeling, so beautifully expressed . . .
posted by
Soaker
on January 15, 2009 at 7:24 AM
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Phantom Queen, the answer ;)
I have just hopefully answered your question on my blog!
posted by
phantomqueen
on January 15, 2009 at 7:18 AM
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Enigmatic emotion - beautiful!
posted by
phantomqueen
on January 15, 2009 at 7:16 AM
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Very nicely done, calia ~.~
I do love it! Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 15, 2009 at 6:48 AM
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Wonderful poem
you have captured it very well my dear! Very well done indeed; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on January 15, 2009 at 3:16 AM
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I agree with Ted, Superbly done indeed!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 14, 2009 at 11:51 PM
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Excellent work!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 14, 2009 at 11:50 PM
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Thanks for your comments soulbuilder and merkie!
posted by
calia14
on January 14, 2009 at 11:47 PM
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Interesting question. Too long, and you forget!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 14, 2009 at 11:24 PM
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Excellent Calia. A great job in this form. Love it!
posted by
merkie
on January 14, 2009 at 8:48 PM
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