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Sinome, how interesting you chose to call this "Elizabeth"...:)
My wife's name, and thankfully she didn't get away (celecbrated 40 yrs of marriage as of this date.
:) Thank you for reminding me of how lucky and blessed I am....
posted by
Rumor
on January 19, 2009 at 4:45 PM
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I see neither a fool nor a queen in this poem...
...just a man missing the woman he loves. Your usual excellence.
posted by
metalrat
on January 18, 2009 at 8:36 PM
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Well if that isn't a poignant ending to a movie! I adore it to no end! Exquisite imagery! Incredulous setting and congruity of the imagery too! love you! sammy
posted by
sam444
on January 18, 2009 at 6:09 PM
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Sinome
What a poem of an unfulfilled and yet fulfilling love...you have once more shown possibilities, beautifully...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 18, 2009 at 4:24 PM
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A most loving tribute...
To the hidden love...that lay in a person's heart...Stunning work dear Sinome!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 18, 2009 at 2:31 PM
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The fool and the queen...too cool, my friend!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 18, 2009 at 2:10 PM
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thank you for your kind words, but it is you that has all the talent Sinome
posted by
muley12
on January 18, 2009 at 1:07 PM
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Clearly, she leaves a remarkable imprint on both his heart and soul…. Another beauty, Sinome.
posted by
Troosha
on January 18, 2009 at 10:31 AM
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Is wonderful how you give meaning to single words and better yet how you choose to connect them...a master piece
posted by
Itza
on January 18, 2009 at 10:22 AM
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I liked the analogy employed to describe the pain of separation. Extraordinary poem.
posted by
hardilaziz
on January 18, 2009 at 3:56 AM
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you know how to love and keep from afar......so truly, innocently......
posted by
Star5_
on January 18, 2009 at 12:02 AM
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Thanks for the cat on a mushroom!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 17, 2009 at 11:07 PM
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I like this poem when it is the fellow missing his love instead of the girl. Kudos Marta well done !
posted by
merkie
on January 17, 2009 at 10:13 PM
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you write of unrequited love so passionately You break my heart each time
posted by
Kabu
on January 17, 2009 at 7:26 PM
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Re: Wow!
I am just having trouble keeping my voice. My divorce is still pending. I have fallen in love and had my heart broken. Friendships have been redefined... and well some have died. Inspiration is just hard to come by. Thanks for missing me.
As always, I love your work.
posted by
flappergirl
on January 17, 2009 at 6:43 PM
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Wow!
Just simply wow
posted by
flappergirl
on January 17, 2009 at 5:33 PM
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always so heartfelt...xxxoo glorious !
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on January 17, 2009 at 4:02 PM
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Yet another pretty, longing love poems
... I like those types! great closing!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 17, 2009 at 4:00 PM
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You are just too good
posted by
skye08
on January 17, 2009 at 1:59 PM
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