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Re: wow
Thank you, NewMentality, sometimes those 3 are used too easily and without meaning... but when they are used properly there is magic
posted by
lionreign
on January 29, 2009 at 2:52 AM
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wow
I really like all of your poems that I have read so far... I agree it takes courage to say those three words. However, once you speak those three words (and really mean them) you are set free... Nothing can beat that feeling. Anyone who is able to evoke those words must be very special :)
posted by
NewMentality
on January 28, 2009 at 12:25 PM
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Re: OTA
Thanks OTA, and my thought is that if those 3 little words, sincerely said cannot set you free from your chains of fear and self doubt, if only for a moment, then you are probably saying them to the wrong person, or for the wrong reasons
posted by
lionreign
on January 26, 2009 at 4:27 AM
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Re: Sam444
Thank you! I was rather pleased with some of the lines in this one, it felt good so I am very glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on January 26, 2009 at 4:24 AM
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Re: drohan254
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on January 26, 2009 at 4:19 AM
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Re: Three simple words are the magic key!!!!.......You said so nicely.
Thank you 9STAR!
posted by
lionreign
on January 26, 2009 at 4:11 AM
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Re: gypsypoet1975
Thanks Gypsy - glad you like this one, I thought it was best to let people make up their own 3 words, my guess is that most of us will find the same 3
posted by
lionreign
on January 26, 2009 at 4:11 AM
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Re: Smittenheimer
Thank you - That is a great thing for me to hear.
posted by
lionreign
on January 26, 2009 at 4:05 AM
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Re: Only words
Very true! Thanks malcolm
posted by
lionreign
on January 26, 2009 at 3:58 AM
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Re: hardilaziz
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on January 26, 2009 at 3:57 AM
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Re: Merkie
Thank you! I am happy that my words can touch a reader in such a way - that is why we write, isn't it?
posted by
lionreign
on January 26, 2009 at 3:34 AM
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Re: Lion
Thanks Troosha, I think it is too easy for people to mumble those 3 words out of habit and then they are flat and meaningless, but when spoken from a depth and exuberance of emotion then there is nothing to match the feeling they can inspire.
I am on a long run of love poems aren't I? This is something I have no choice in... I just write what my subconscious gives me 
posted by
lionreign
on January 26, 2009 at 3:30 AM
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Re: This piece is captivating!
Thank you LadyGhost, I am very happy that you enjoyed this
posted by
lionreign
on January 26, 2009 at 3:26 AM
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the last three words of this are quite intruiging.. .. unconfined.. beautiful
posted by
Blue_feathers
on January 24, 2009 at 8:10 AM
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I throw open the doors of my soul
Letting love and desire blaze Then the words can be received! Awesome imagery! I just took my time and let the cadence lead me! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 23, 2009 at 5:17 PM
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the three words .
beautifully expressed
posted by
drohan254
on January 23, 2009 at 2:12 PM
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Three simple words are the magic key!!!!.......You said so nicely.
posted by
Star5_
on January 23, 2009 at 1:49 PM
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WISE choice to not state what doesn't need to be stated... those 3 words! lOVE the last line!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 23, 2009 at 1:47 PM
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I really felt this. This is a great poem
posted by
Smittenheimer
on January 23, 2009 at 11:35 AM
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Only words
but less is often more, I find. Lovely verses
posted by
malcolm
on January 23, 2009 at 10:58 AM
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Eloquently done my friend.
posted by
hardilaziz
on January 23, 2009 at 10:58 AM
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Again you display the deep emotion of your love so well. Encore Lion ~
your words like music flow and carry an impact to stir the reader to remember and dream.
posted by
merkie
on January 23, 2009 at 10:18 AM
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Lion
Sometimes we feel those 3 words just aren’t quite enough… but when spoken with tenderness and an open heart they can mean so much. You are a seemingly endless well of love poems!
posted by
Troosha
on January 23, 2009 at 8:07 AM
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This piece is captivating!
Three simple words, yet this poem is anything but simple! It is packed with emotion and is gripping. I know I've been in this position - the uncertainty, the anxiety, and thrill and excitement when finally letting go... Well Done!!
posted by
LadyGhost1970
on January 23, 2009 at 7:17 AM
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