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posted by
Itza
on January 24, 2009 at 8:58 PM
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Sinome
These two rain poems belong together, of course. Longing and resignation...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 24, 2009 at 7:26 PM
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You know...
...I actually love right after a storm such as you describe, but, I also love storms.
And a day like that is so befitting a mood of resignation.
posted by
metalrat
on January 24, 2009 at 3:41 PM
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BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED ..IN YOUR WORDS FELT THAT GREEN OLIVE TREE ..THE WARMTH OF PEOPLE AROUND
posted by
drohan254
on January 24, 2009 at 2:49 PM
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Carefree, peaceful walk in the rain...
may I join this queen of love poetry :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 24, 2009 at 2:42 PM
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Very beautiful and it seems so accuarte. I have been there.
posted by
BetsyLewis
on January 24, 2009 at 12:35 PM
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so very fine. your imagery makes me feel like I'm walking with you.
posted by
muley12
on January 24, 2009 at 12:10 PM
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Sinome, soetimes a walk after a rain, or in light rain, can be therapeutic
in its own way..no thoughts good or bad, no concerns..just the walk..
...
posted by
Rumor
on January 24, 2009 at 11:22 AM
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I have experienced this empty feeling time and again. Very well described by you.
posted by
hardilaziz
on January 24, 2009 at 11:20 AM
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always, so very beautiful.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on January 24, 2009 at 8:52 AM
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I love your choice of words, and the pictures you paint! Thanks for commenting on my post. Have a great day! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on January 24, 2009 at 7:07 AM
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Truly, it is just that at times! Nothing to say or do, just walk in one's inner peace! Love this poem! Have a great Saturday too! All my love! sammy
posted by
sam444
on January 24, 2009 at 7:06 AM
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A beautiful description of inner peace. I feel that now, that our cold spell is over and the sun is warming my poor bones again. See you soon!!
posted by
vogue
on January 24, 2009 at 6:05 AM
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it's not what it's.......turn around, you see some different......
posted by
Star5_
on January 24, 2009 at 5:57 AM
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poetry
posted by
lestate7
on January 24, 2009 at 3:52 AM
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I can see myself in this work of art
It is refreshing to read a piece of work and feel it! I enjoyed reading your work. I could relate. I look forward to reading more! BE BLESSED!
posted by
MustThink
on January 23, 2009 at 11:01 PM
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