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Re: like it
Thank you! I think that the urge to learn what our past can teach us and grow towards that love is fundamental to our growth as people
posted by
lionreign
on January 29, 2009 at 2:54 AM
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like it
I really like how you moved from shadows/conflict and unrealized potential to light/hope at the end. I feel like all of your poems are really speaking to my current situation of reflection on past mistakes and hoping for that elusive love that will overcome.
posted by
NewMentality
on January 28, 2009 at 12:32 PM
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Re: gypsypoet1975
Thanks Gypsy! I am so glad you liked it - it gives me a tremendous confidence boost with my writing to read comments like this one, thank you
posted by
lionreign
on January 27, 2009 at 4:52 AM
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Re: Sam444
Of course - how better to end? Thanks - I am very happy to have you read
posted by
lionreign
on January 27, 2009 at 4:48 AM
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Re: Shakespearean!
Wow! Thanks Luz, that is a compliment
posted by
lionreign
on January 27, 2009 at 4:45 AM
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Re: Power of love, expressed powerfully! - Ash
thanks Ash!
posted by
lionreign
on January 27, 2009 at 4:42 AM
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Re: wow..woooowwww..soooo sooo beautiful lion ..your music ring in my ear ..
thanks drohan254!
posted by
lionreign
on January 27, 2009 at 4:39 AM
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Re: Merkie
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on January 27, 2009 at 4:36 AM
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Re: Lion
But Troosha, sweetie, you already do... it's just that sometimes things take longer than others
posted by
lionreign
on January 27, 2009 at 4:36 AM
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Re: Great read
Thanks Calia - I couldn't leave you on a low note....
posted by
lionreign
on January 27, 2009 at 4:34 AM
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Re: with your words, you make a sweet surrounding.......a paradise read, thanks
Thank you 9STAR! I am very glad you enjoyed this
posted by
lionreign
on January 27, 2009 at 4:30 AM
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Re: lionreign ~.~
Glad you enjoyed it SS.
posted by
lionreign
on January 27, 2009 at 4:25 AM
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Re: For a while there I thought you had changed the topic my friend!
I do write on this topic a lot, don't I?
Glad you enjoyed this one, my friend
posted by
lionreign
on January 27, 2009 at 4:24 AM
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Lion...THIS IS YOUR BEST! I think this is fantastic! Beautiful twist at the end, awesome rhyme scheme flow, creative, just everything!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 27, 2009 at 2:48 AM
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And yet these twisted shadows swiftly clear
When exposed to love's sweet light . You always end on a high note! I simply adore your poetry! sam 
posted by
sam444
on January 26, 2009 at 10:40 PM
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Shakespearean!
Very, Very nice, Lionreign!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on January 26, 2009 at 6:25 PM
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Power of love, expressed powerfully! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 26, 2009 at 5:52 PM
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wow..woooowwww..soooo sooo beautiful lion ..your music ring in my ear ..
posted by
drohan254
on January 26, 2009 at 12:22 PM
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Wow Let the love light shine!Good job here Lionreign!
posted by
merkie
on January 26, 2009 at 11:15 AM
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Lion
I want to live in your world; a world that is always healed with love.
posted by
Troosha
on January 26, 2009 at 8:31 AM
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Great read
I love how you exposed us to all of the ills, then turned it around at the end.
posted by
calia14
on January 26, 2009 at 8:27 AM
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with your words, you make a sweet surrounding.......a paradise read, thanks
lion.....
posted by
Star5_
on January 26, 2009 at 6:49 AM
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lionreign ~.~
Love conquers all! Great write...great read. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 26, 2009 at 6:47 AM
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For a while there I thought you had changed the topic my friend!
But no, there it lies, alive and well; very cleverly done Lion; bravo; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on January 26, 2009 at 6:16 AM
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