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thanks for all the kind comments
I am very new to poetry (just started a few months ago)... the feedback is great and I will keep reading the poems others write. There is something to learn from each piece I read. Not to mention words that often inspire.
posted by
NewMentality
on January 29, 2009 at 8:23 PM
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This has some very evocative imagery
the the cadence is incredible - very good poem! I have trouble with titles too...
posted by
lionreign
on January 29, 2009 at 2:35 AM
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may Grace continue
to be in your face
every morning
posted by
mysteria
on January 29, 2009 at 1:06 AM
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New
Another bubble bath leaving me cold .... now there's a line that invokes a raw and sad feeling. 
posted by
Troosha
on January 28, 2009 at 2:32 PM
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I like this poem and I can feel the hurt you feel
posted by
Lanetay
on January 28, 2009 at 1:35 PM
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“Resurfacing” works well for your fine expression. BCA, Bill*s Ca
e 
posted by
BC-A
on January 28, 2009 at 4:54 AM
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You sure know how to draw the reader into your emotional state!
So sad to see someone longing to be loved!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 28, 2009 at 4:52 AM
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WHAT CAN I SAY? I LIKE IT!
-=RenSpur=-
posted by
RenSpur
on January 27, 2009 at 8:06 PM
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Wow!
The inner-conflict in this is palpable. I really like it!
Welcome to blogit and may you post many more like this.
posted by
metalrat
on January 27, 2009 at 7:55 PM
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