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touching poem Itza
posted by
drohan254
on January 31, 2009 at 3:27 AM
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Beautiful expression of the true self.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on January 30, 2009 at 10:43 AM
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Itza
We are the person we are today because of the person we used to be (including the little girl that will never go away). 
posted by
Troosha
on January 30, 2009 at 7:42 AM
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as far as your heart is, and as long as you live I will be here Such a fantastic close!!!! KUDOS! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 30, 2009 at 5:06 AM
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Insightful
this is lovely. even though life moulds our changes, there is always a hint of who we were, and if you remember that sweet scent, it will grow stronger.thank you for the read and for all your comments and time spent with me. i have to say farewell for a while.thank you, and keep on writing.
posted by
rubypoem
on January 29, 2009 at 11:55 PM
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Good poetry!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 29, 2009 at 10:14 PM
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We always feel...
...that there's a part of ourselves we leave behind as we grow, but, like you said, the person we used to be is only as far away as our heart.
Your self-reflection shows a maturity beyond your years.
posted by
metalrat
on January 29, 2009 at 8:50 PM
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posted by
RomaKay
on January 29, 2009 at 7:26 PM
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Somewhere love. BCA, Bill*s Cae
posted by
BC-A
on January 29, 2009 at 7:11 PM
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and there is where she will be, Great work my friend and thank you.
posted by
RITE2SPIN
on January 29, 2009 at 6:27 PM
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