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Re: BetsyLewis
Thanks - for me too, the helping just because it's needed with no want for reward or renown, simply helping because you want to help that person...
posted by
lionreign
on February 3, 2009 at 3:22 AM
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To me, this is love. "
Out from the fog stretches a hand
To offer strength, quiet and discreet,
With no expectation or demand."
posted by
BetsyLewis
on February 2, 2009 at 7:07 PM
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Re: Onset of clarity cleverly phrased! - Ash
Thanks Ash!
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2009 at 8:35 AM
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Re: dpaulinomorris24
The mists will always come and go, I think the beauty of life is in how we deal with them and maybe help others deal with them
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2009 at 8:04 AM
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Re: Those mists
I don't think they ever do... but there are times when they thin a little. thanks
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2009 at 8:01 AM
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Re: as always something to enjoy ........you always pour like a sweet rain.....
Thanks 9STAR! - I will
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2009 at 7:59 AM
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Re: TAPS
thanks - and they certainly will... that's why it's always good to have those hands nearby
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2009 at 7:57 AM
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Re: rockingrector
Thanks - glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2009 at 7:53 AM
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Re: soul_Builder101
Thank you.
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2009 at 7:52 AM
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Re: Merkie
I never thought of that image - but I'd guess so! glad you enjoyed it!
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2009 at 7:49 AM
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Re: Luz_Briar
thanks Luz... it does actually feel quite easy to read out
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2009 at 7:45 AM
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Re: drohan254
Thank you drohan!
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2009 at 7:43 AM
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Re: Sam444
Well you know me - I don't like to end on a sad note
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2009 at 7:34 AM
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Re: Troosha
Thanks... glad the ambiguity in the owner of the hand came through, as long as it's extended in love I see no difference in this scenario
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2009 at 7:33 AM
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Re: BetsyLewis
thank you, and welcome to my little bit of Blogit
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2009 at 7:25 AM
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Onset of clarity cleverly phrased! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on February 1, 2009 at 2:49 PM
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Great work! The mist closes, you feel hopeful, it clears and anticipate it coming again.
posted by
dpaulinomorris24
on February 1, 2009 at 11:38 AM
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Those mists
never completely clear do they? Lovely expression here.
posted by
malcolm
on February 1, 2009 at 10:56 AM
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as always something to enjoy ........you always pour like a sweet rain.....
keep writing....
posted by
Star5_
on February 1, 2009 at 10:30 AM
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That's great! And be sure, the mists will, at some point, close in again.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 1, 2009 at 10:04 AM
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Another great poem. Thank you.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on February 1, 2009 at 10:03 AM
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This is very inspiring!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 31, 2009 at 11:10 AM
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Like seaching for underwater gems you come up for a breath to clear your mind and return refreshed Images of renewal.Well done lion.Enjoy the weekend!
posted by
merkie
on January 30, 2009 at 8:21 PM
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begins mysteriously, clears up, and then ends as it began. excellent. this would be a fun poem to say aloud i would imagine
posted by
Luz_Briar
on January 30, 2009 at 8:12 PM
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But through the mists you'll hear a heart beat
Out from the fog stretches a hand
To offer strength, quiet and discreet,
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till the end i just loved it ..it's music rings in my ear ..i will read it again..
so wonderful lion ...
posted by
drohan254
on January 30, 2009 at 12:37 PM
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Renewed to start again! I like the message of hope! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 30, 2009 at 12:27 PM
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Be it the hand of a higher power or the hand of a loved one – sometimes that’s all it takes for us to shake ourselves out of the fog of the often overwhelming “to-do” list or the myriad of thoughts we may be stuggling with. Great poem, Lion! Message well delivered.
posted by
Troosha
on January 30, 2009 at 12:03 PM
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This is very beautiful. Hope and help from despair.
posted by
BetsyLewis
on January 30, 2009 at 11:33 AM
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