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every moment in time can be or bring life or death...reminds me of a song
"One Moment in Time."....
posted by
Rumor
on February 7, 2009 at 6:39 PM
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Death and Birth... one in the same!
'How will you create it this time?' Excellent concept... makes me think ... I'm wanting to sneak a naughty comment into that 'sleep' part that's 'awakening' that we can 'create', sort of like a 'dream', but I probably shouldn't go there since you seem to be less shallow and corrupt than I!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on February 3, 2009 at 3:21 AM
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it is always like that night have to end for another day
posted by
Star5_
on February 2, 2009 at 5:48 PM
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How beautifully expressed Moon, each instant pregnant with infinite potential. But coming from you it is not surprising. You are a master
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on February 1, 2009 at 8:21 PM
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Puzzle of birth-death cycle expressed in an intriguing poetic style...
well-done!
posted by
ash_pradhan
on February 1, 2009 at 2:54 PM
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wow! I am honest it's sunday and my nbomt day!!!
posted by
Star5_
on February 1, 2009 at 7:31 AM
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I love your poetry! Such depth! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 1, 2009 at 3:48 AM
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Deep meanings within the breathe we call life. Bravo.
posted by
merkie
on January 31, 2009 at 9:43 PM
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posted by
Blue_feathers
on January 31, 2009 at 8:56 PM
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The truth behind death and rebirth! A superb work indeed!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 31, 2009 at 7:52 PM
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"Be honest about what you do know"
Exactly!
posted by
VictoriaP
on January 31, 2009 at 4:09 PM
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Be truthful about each birth and each death….I love it! Because each breath is either one or the other. Thank you, Moon, for your kind comment on today’s poem. When you put your heart and soul into something and then “put it out there” it’s nice to know that it reaches someone.
posted by
Troosha
on January 31, 2009 at 10:43 AM
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INCREDIBLE !
each instant pregnant with infinite potential...............AMAZING LINE !
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on January 31, 2009 at 10:06 AM
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