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Passionately Powerful.....the heart laid open. Every line piercing.
posted by
yellowrose55
on February 4, 2009 at 12:50 PM
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2 Thumbs up!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on February 4, 2009 at 10:17 AM
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You are just too good
posted by
skye08
on February 4, 2009 at 9:46 AM
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Sinome
Yup... that got me alright.... How can one not be touched by such an out-pouring of raw emotion.
posted by
Troosha
on February 4, 2009 at 7:22 AM
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Rich in imagery and emotions. What a sensational ending. Wow!
posted by
hardilaziz
on February 4, 2009 at 6:52 AM
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Simply superb...words fail me! Thanks for commenting on my post---I'm glad you liked the story.....watch out for more "forwards"! God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on February 4, 2009 at 3:05 AM
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Stupendous write Sinome
has it all; imagery, emotion, hope, dejection; a brilliant depiction my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on February 4, 2009 at 2:51 AM
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Nice description
posted by
Lanetay
on February 3, 2009 at 11:32 PM
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And Oh, thank you for your smile. Kep smiling. Always
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on February 3, 2009 at 9:20 PM
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This,my princess Marta, is so sweet, so lovingly expressed, such vivid imagery that it has touched me very deeply
for though I will never love again, I do not want to be alone.
So come my friend, lets dance. Please be assured and convinced from you desert prince xoxoxo
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on February 3, 2009 at 8:21 PM
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always have something to learn from you....
posted by
Star5_
on February 3, 2009 at 8:12 PM
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My eyes teared as I neared the end of this...I agree it has many qualities of the Native Americans, though at the same time it has such heartfelt, emotion, that your words ring so true! A HUGE KUDOS for this one!!!!!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 3, 2009 at 8:05 PM
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Outstanding imagery! It is the Sacred Hoop of the Lakota! Your poem encompasses the four directions of the universe! It is part of a poem I am writing now, and it has etchings in the earth and the red orb! You imagery is ongoing! The convincing is in the experience for me! BRAVO SWEETIE!!!!!! sammy
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on February 3, 2009 at 7:47 PM
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Beautiful poem. So much vulnerability.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 3, 2009 at 7:16 PM
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Such beautiful writing
I know this feeling well!
posted by
calia14
on February 3, 2009 at 6:46 PM
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Interesting sentiments!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 3, 2009 at 6:44 PM
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