Comments on Hilda Hansen's Secret Realm (Part 4).

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yes, it's nice to know you can change anything in your
own story writing... 

posted by Samantha39 on February 5, 2009 at 7:47 PM | link to this | reply

You handle dialogue so very well! It is an absolute pleasure to read I am serious when I say, you have great potential! I know you know what I mean! I believe it can happen! Will answer you e-mail soon too! Have a blessed day! sam

posted by sam444 on February 5, 2009 at 6:23 PM | link to this | reply

I have visited Morocco often and just love it, especially a place called Zagora, which is also known as "The Gate to the Desert" and is between Atlas mountains and the desert. Will follow your story with interest.

posted by vogue on February 5, 2009 at 3:21 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Elinjo
Thanks for the visit WileyJohn. It must have been a very interesting experience. I have a Moroccan penfriend who writes fascinating letters about his life in a village in the Atlas Mountains. However, so far I have not visited Morocco. Wishing you a pleasant day.

posted by elinjo on February 5, 2009 at 12:30 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Mal! It's fun writing this, I've nearly finished Part 5. Wishing you pleasant day.

posted by elinjo on February 5, 2009 at 12:26 PM | link to this | reply

You have a great ear for dialog.  Mal

posted by gapcohen on February 5, 2009 at 8:28 AM | link to this | reply

Elinjo
A very nice story. I spent some time in Morocco back in the 50's, in Rabat etc.

posted by WileyJohn on February 5, 2009 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply