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mneme
Very well done! I admire the artistry, but I regret that it speaks of a real, lived experience that still needs to be overcome...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 10, 2009 at 6:52 PM
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That's quite a bit of imagery there. So many different kinds of butterflies and moths. You picked quite the opposites for your poem. Good writing.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 9, 2009 at 5:31 PM
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Twist ending
I was following a sweet and sunny poem, then BAM! darkness and conflict. You tricked me! :)
posted by
calia14
on February 7, 2009 at 7:56 PM
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