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Re: BetsyLewis
Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 9, 2009 at 5:54 PM
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Re: PoetRaye
Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 9, 2009 at 5:54 PM
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Re: Troosha
You are right now that I think about it..lol...Thank you so much Troosha!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 9, 2009 at 5:51 PM
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Re: Mariaki
I wouldn't want to either....Thank you so much!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 9, 2009 at 5:51 PM
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Re: Sinome
Yes we are talking about the same guy...lol...Aladdin was a great movie indeed! Thank you my friend!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 9, 2009 at 5:50 PM
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Re: Drohan254
Thank you so much!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 9, 2009 at 5:49 PM
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Re: WileyJohn
Thank you so much!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 9, 2009 at 5:42 PM
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Re: Kabu
Not if I have any say...
...lol..Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 9, 2009 at 5:39 PM
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Re: Yellowrose55
Wouldn't be great to be them even just for a few moments...Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 9, 2009 at 5:39 PM
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Re: Ash
I try to hide it...though it just comes seeping out..Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 9, 2009 at 5:32 PM
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Re: Merkie
Thank you so much! And no worries, there is more on the way!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 9, 2009 at 5:28 PM
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Re: Ill Logik
Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 9, 2009 at 5:26 PM
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Re: Scotcanada
You are most welcome...I thank you for liking my new poem..I guess, it is my over active imagination that seems to think up all sorts of crazy things.. I write experiences too...I will try to have more to share..
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 9, 2009 at 5:23 PM
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Interestng imagry. Nice.
posted by
BetsyLewis
on February 9, 2009 at 5:17 PM
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Beautifully lived and written, Marion!
posted by
Katray2
on February 9, 2009 at 7:56 AM
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Wiccan
Reminiscent of “Prince Charming” tales and all the angst and anticipation of his arrival. Loved it!
posted by
Troosha
on February 9, 2009 at 6:24 AM
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Fairy tales are just like dreams aren't they.......
this sounds like one I wouldn't want to wake up from in a hurry; beautifully depicted my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on February 9, 2009 at 3:31 AM
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Beautiful Marion... so inocently sensual...like fairytale <<<<sigh>>>> (
We are still talking about the same guy right??? :-) just checking ...loll) It reminds me of Aladin ...I loved that movie :-)
posted by
Sinome
on February 8, 2009 at 8:54 PM
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beautiful and dreamy story ..very well written
posted by
drohan254
on February 8, 2009 at 8:31 PM
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Wigopa
Excellent Marion.............
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 8, 2009 at 7:00 PM
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I have a feeling that this is a doomed love. So sweet so sad.
posted by
Kabu
on February 8, 2009 at 6:38 PM
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Such a magical whirlwind of a story... building to that romantic moment.
posted by
yellowrose55
on February 8, 2009 at 5:42 PM
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"Freedom to choose the love you wish it to be"...
u r a true romantic, Marion! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on February 8, 2009 at 4:46 PM
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Excellent story poem enchats the reader and whispers more!
posted by
merkie
on February 8, 2009 at 4:33 PM
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GREAT!!
This is very touching, deep writing.
posted by
Ideologikal
on February 8, 2009 at 3:32 PM
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Thanks for the kind comment.
I love your new poem. How do you get your ideas? i don't have ideas-- just experiences. Write more!
posted by
scotcanada
on February 8, 2009 at 3:26 PM
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Re: Lustorlove
Thank you! It is great to see you in this neck of the woods!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 8, 2009 at 3:15 PM
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you are indeed maid Marion
posted by
Lanetay
on February 8, 2009 at 3:12 PM
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Re: WilliamTaylor
Huge thanks my friend!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 8, 2009 at 2:39 PM
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Deep...excellent as ever, Marion!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 8, 2009 at 2:36 PM
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