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Universal expression!
I love it! It can relate to so many of life's realities and everyday situations. Great stuff!
posted by
porcelaingoddess1
on February 18, 2009 at 7:11 PM
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Almost prayer-like, Lady Ghost, but a most beautiful yearning of the heart, universal, it can be said, whether dream or real? Real it is. The fact is that reality appears as a dream.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on February 16, 2009 at 9:28 AM
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A bit pleading...but then I have been there too!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 11, 2009 at 9:10 PM
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This is a real emotion; wanting someone to stay when it is probably over and denial sets in! Well versed indeed! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 11, 2009 at 7:37 PM
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I am sure many can relate to this!
An excellent tale of so many and very well written; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on February 11, 2009 at 4:32 AM
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Wow lots of moving pleas to remain together. Always so much drama around to scribe into verse.Well done!
posted by
merkie
on February 10, 2009 at 9:18 PM
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This pulls at the heart strings...Very well said!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 10, 2009 at 7:26 PM
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Re: Hi!
Thank you, Lola! Sometimes, I find it very liberating to write pieces that encompass a wide range of emotions, but it can sound like it came from a specific relationship or period of time in my life, lol... and where my husband logs in to read my work and comments, I wanted to be sure he knew there was nothing to fret about, lol! I'm glad the emotions and situations rang through so well; I feared it might lack since it wasn't related to anything specific... God bless!
posted by
LadyGhost1970
on February 10, 2009 at 4:46 PM
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Hi!
That was like every, heart-wrenching, co-dependent, psychotic relationship I've ever been in or witnessed! You speak for many so well.
posted by
JDM1991
on February 10, 2009 at 4:34 PM
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