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Beautiful!
posted by
Chilitree
on February 16, 2009 at 9:01 PM
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A beautiful simile at the end that got nailed with cupid's arrow of sadness! But exquisite imagery nonetheless, similar to
bestest! Might not be a word! lol I am going to stay with Blogit as long as I can! Things are very difficult now and I actually just take life one at a time! It is a most precarious circumstance! I complained about the volume of medication and the number of doctors prescribing and it fell on deaf ears! Now I pay the consequences! Alas, another character building opportunity! I am laughing, that is too much philosophy, not the
bestest! May not be a word! lol again! Sammy loves you dearly!
xoxoxoxo Did you see my tribute poem and list of bloggers, I have mentioned you there!
posted by
sam444
on February 15, 2009 at 3:33 PM
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I wish to thank you for your comment. You have taken a lot of trouble and I truly appreciate that. I needed to get a perspective, because I was really not sure what to think. All the comments have been very helpful. No, I haven't been to the boat show. Since this morning, I have lumbago again, I can hardly move and am in a lot of pain. And that 5 days before I have to fly for 14 hours. Just my luck. I hope it will be better in a few days.
posted by
vogue
on February 15, 2009 at 2:27 PM
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A BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHING POEM SINOME ..
I know that your words of gold and your silver thoughts
though very loved, will always be
like those eyes I adore , too far from me
posted by
drohan254
on February 15, 2009 at 1:40 PM
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Your dreams appear so real and universal.
posted by
hardilaziz
on February 15, 2009 at 9:42 AM
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So pure and touching words ...
posted by
afzal50
on February 15, 2009 at 9:39 AM
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Sinome
Heartache and inner joy all wrapped up together….
posted by
Troosha
on February 15, 2009 at 8:08 AM
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Sinome, have you ever thought of trying to get in the greeting card business with your poems. I can just picture yours selling like hotcakes.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 15, 2009 at 1:14 AM
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posted by
CRShelley
on February 14, 2009 at 10:52 PM
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very romantic
posted by
Lanetay
on February 14, 2009 at 7:47 PM
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Happy Valentines to my favorite sinome!!!!!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on February 14, 2009 at 7:34 PM
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You seem to portray what Indians call DIWAANA...love-craziness! It is, by the way, not the real thing!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 14, 2009 at 6:53 PM
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happy valentine S your poetry as always amazing! Less
posted by
lestate7
on February 14, 2009 at 5:00 PM
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Such heartache.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 14, 2009 at 4:59 PM
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