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Re: Marvelous...
teddypoet, this comment has made my day. I quietly read your work, and maybe once in a while I should say so.
posted by
Azur
on June 5, 2009 at 3:12 PM
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Marvelous...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 5, 2009 at 12:26 PM
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Azur
This is so vivid, in so few words.. lovely.
posted by
mneme
on May 28, 2009 at 10:00 PM
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Poignant love story. Sad with shattered dreams!
posted by
merkie
on May 2, 2009 at 9:00 AM
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I love this....so creative, one never knows or can predict the outcome of events.
posted by
yellowrose55
on March 29, 2009 at 9:55 PM
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Painful and beautiful.
So many women walk similar in similar footprints ... sand, black top, carpet. It's almost hard to read. Your imagery was well done. I've been gone so long I don't remember this work from you. I like it.
posted by
Temple
on March 1, 2009 at 6:14 AM
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Oh my! What you've done with your letters.
How could I have been so late reading. But, I have now. I don't know what I said about wine. I can't remember, but it does not matter. Keep writing please.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 24, 2009 at 1:36 PM
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This is a novel! Great Job!
posted by
CRShelley
on February 21, 2009 at 9:17 PM
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for days the image of a tiny shell on a raft with a sail has blown in and
out of the waters of my imagination.........
I wish sometimes, that I still loved.
posted by
benzinha
on February 16, 2009 at 7:24 PM
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What a poem! You have talent!
posted by
calia14
on February 15, 2009 at 1:53 PM
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Great writing.
It held my attention!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on February 15, 2009 at 9:01 AM
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Azur
The use of a shell on a tiny raft, with a sail was absolute brilliance!
posted by
Troosha
on February 15, 2009 at 8:54 AM
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I read this again and it is amazing the many ways I can see the illustrative imagery! Amazing! I have it promoted now! I see figurative and literal! WOW! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 15, 2009 at 7:06 AM
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"All the world in a grain of sand, eternity in an hour."
Wow! Azur, that's all I can say... Wow!
posted by
Pat_B
on February 15, 2009 at 4:48 AM
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I couldn't add to the beauty here.
posted by
Kabu
on February 14, 2009 at 9:36 PM
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Azur... this is wonderful... poetic and dramatic and sweet. The other day when you asked if you should promote your posts as letters or poems , I am afraid that my answer was not clear... I said letters because though they could be poems they were more! not less... they would apeal to a wider audience if you qualify them as letters .. but Gawd nows that they could be beautiful poems as well. Your mentor was right. Who can define poetry... poetry is all around and everything, if looked at right becomes poetry. This one was amazing... :-)
posted by
Sinome
on February 14, 2009 at 9:17 PM
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Re: These are the poetic letters, notes on seashells, emails
that need NO changing into poetry, she meant to write.
posted by
benzinha
on February 14, 2009 at 8:39 PM
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These are the poetic letters, notes on seashells, emails
that need to Changing into poetry, but just ARE.
Whether long or short, the telling of it is the essence of the emotions felt, and you told it here.
posted by
benzinha
on February 14, 2009 at 8:39 PM
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This definitely caught my attention! Girls need Tasers now!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 14, 2009 at 6:47 PM
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How fortuitous for me! I saw you on my comments page and I knew my blog was out here! This one defies words! It is romantic, captivating, triumph, loss, longing, and the shell was brilliant, just brilliant! It has perfect cadence for me, I read it twice and the cadence stayed the same! Excellent! WOW! I am pulling my current poem some time in the morning and I want to promote this fabulous work! Thanks, I know my answer, just wanted to let you know! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 14, 2009 at 6:14 PM
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