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light on the heart ..beautiful words
posted by
drohan254
on February 25, 2009 at 3:50 AM
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Yes....and I do love those splashes. and the wonderful flow of your poem.
posted by
yellowrose55
on February 25, 2009 at 12:31 AM
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I love it, there are times when they need a splash! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 25, 2009 at 12:18 AM
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When they are very still, they may need the splash test.
posted by
mariss9
on February 24, 2009 at 4:14 PM
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dont want to splash in smelly stale water
posted by
Lanetay
on February 24, 2009 at 12:04 PM
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You are right my friend .....
posted by
afzal50
on February 24, 2009 at 9:54 AM
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LOL!!!
Sometimes still waters run smelly? I love this one and it's imagery...it may have made me smile but I will remember it
posted by
lionreign
on February 24, 2009 at 8:38 AM
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very creative imagery !
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on February 24, 2009 at 8:15 AM
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