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On so many levels...
this is like comfort food. That peice of sweet but not too sweet you look for after dinner.
posted by
LaMerci
on August 21, 2009 at 4:33 AM
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There's no nylon on my face. You write very well, my friend...
posted by
hardilaziz
on March 7, 2009 at 3:19 AM
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Great as ever...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 6, 2009 at 11:12 PM
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Re: vogue
Hi vogue, thanks so much for reading. I like that line, too. Every now and then I get a good one. :) Glad you like it also.
posted by
Temple
on March 6, 2009 at 11:10 PM
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Re: sam444
Hi Sam! I always love feedback on imagery and specific lines. Thanks so much. :) Nice to see you.
posted by
Temple
on March 6, 2009 at 11:09 PM
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I'm with sam. I loved the 'not fluent in your language'. Great imagery.
posted by
vogue
on March 1, 2009 at 8:47 AM
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Wonderful and I adore the affirmation! This line resonated with me:
I am not fluent in your language Love it! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 1, 2009 at 8:39 AM
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Re: RASSE
I love the metaphors and sneaky/hidden meaning. I can say what I want and people still can make it theirs. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for re-reading! Nice to meet you also, I don't think I've seen you here before ... but I've been sort of AWOL.
posted by
Temple
on March 1, 2009 at 7:06 AM
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Re: beautiful....how are you Temple??????
Well, it's complicated how I am. lol ... I posted in Flipping the Gidget, that sums it up. Thanks for the read and I'm glad you liked it. :)
posted by
Temple
on March 1, 2009 at 7:04 AM
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This holds a lot of meaning. I had to read it through twice and am now going back for a third time. Wonderful.
posted by
RASSE
on March 1, 2009 at 6:54 AM
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beautiful....how are you Temple??????
posted by
Star5_
on March 1, 2009 at 6:45 AM
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