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beautiful
posted by
_Twins
on March 15, 2009 at 9:08 PM
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Beautiful and imaginative that simulates the reader*s as well sir. BCA, Bill*s Ca
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posted by
BC-A
on March 2, 2009 at 7:03 AM
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Welcome back Joseph... I have missed your writing!!!! I am so happy you are back... (to stay I hope :-) ) It felt incomplete here in Blogit without you and Marion... I am so happy to see you both again.
posted by
Sinome
on March 2, 2009 at 12:43 AM
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Magical imagery and story! Thanks!
posted by
merkie
on March 1, 2009 at 8:32 PM
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wow. That is amazing. I agree with Sam......give us more
posted by
spiderfly
on March 1, 2009 at 10:47 AM
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OMW! One never knows whom they might find when they come out to check on Blogit! I love this poem! There are so many wonderful things here, the rhyme, cadence, message, natural meter! Wow! It is so fabulous to read your outstanding poetry again! I have missed you terribly! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 1, 2009 at 10:42 AM
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Sentinel
This was my first exposure to your work and after a couple more under it. I'll be going through it all.
I'd call it magical, creative and alluring. .....Randy
posted by
MrDaMan
on March 1, 2009 at 10:26 AM
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