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I've only just discovered this story and am now going to go back to the beginning; very readable. Thanks.
posted by
elinjo
on March 5, 2009 at 10:50 AM
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I agree with salem; but I like how you transisition from one scene to the next! You have a magnificent understand of how to do this! KUDOS! Send those boys soon! lol sam
posted by
sam444
on March 4, 2009 at 8:24 AM
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U write on these matters with great detail; soldier are U? Glad u are here&
making your writing dreams work. Best place top start and get paid (does not matter it is pennies a click, they add up, ask Ariala!)
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on March 3, 2009 at 2:37 PM
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