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Very true and sad too. Good job though, nice read.
posted by
Aspire2Inspire
on March 8, 2009 at 8:17 AM
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Poignantly sad! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 8, 2009 at 5:36 AM
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Very perceptive poem... there is pain and sadness in it... Excellent work!
posted by
Sinome
on March 7, 2009 at 7:54 PM
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Very nice
It's true, you can't really see the nature of anything unbiased until you step away
posted by
calia14
on March 7, 2009 at 6:40 PM
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Well done...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 7, 2009 at 3:20 PM
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Re: Lovely poem, but as my eyes are, my eyes could hardly see, at least
lol no worries, I am the same way....or did I just learn that from my hubby??? (scratches head) Oh well, can't remember
Anyways, thankyou for the comment...much appreciated!!
posted by
Mrs_Laly
on March 7, 2009 at 3:10 PM
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Lovely poem, but as my eyes are, my eyes could hardly see, at least
it goes with the title. Sorry, just being a smart ass. LOL, it's my nature. lol The poem is absolutely wonderful !
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 7, 2009 at 3:01 PM
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