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Creatively vivid!
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 10, 2009 at 9:39 AM
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Glad you got your photo uploaded--i forget how to do that now. Glad you're publishing, that's another thing i want to do.
posted by
Sudanym_
on March 10, 2009 at 6:29 AM
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The way to go! BCA, TOP OF THE STAIRS
posted by
BC-A
on March 9, 2009 at 10:47 PM
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Wowsers! Very enjoyable reading. And ta for the comment, too.
posted by
scotcanada
on March 9, 2009 at 5:19 PM
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Most beautifully done my friend
many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on March 9, 2009 at 5:12 AM
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great title, & lovely first & last lines. Never met a great poet-cook B4
Amen
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on March 9, 2009 at 4:32 AM
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Re: formerstudentintern
I suppose I associate the moon with my more creative side, so I tend to personify it often :-)
posted by
calia14
on March 9, 2009 at 1:11 AM
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Re: rockingrector
thanks so much!
posted by
calia14
on March 9, 2009 at 1:04 AM
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More moon personifciation. Love it.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 8, 2009 at 5:51 PM
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I just love your poems - they're so much to the point but so full of beauty.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on March 8, 2009 at 9:08 AM
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I am with Sinome and I liked this very much too:
A gentle breeze caresses our necks
Bringing us back down to Earth
Love it! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 8, 2009 at 6:02 AM
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Re: sinome
It just felt right! Thanks Sinome!
posted by
calia14
on March 7, 2009 at 8:13 PM
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Good one!
posted by
Rolldawg99
on March 7, 2009 at 8:12 PM
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Beautiful Calia... and I must say unique for you refer to the sun as "her" and the moon as "he"... I don't think I have ever seen them refer to like that... Excellent poem!
posted by
Sinome
on March 7, 2009 at 7:19 PM
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lovely poem
posted by
Lanetay
on March 7, 2009 at 7:17 PM
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