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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on March 13, 2009 at 1:16 PM
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True Yoga, Buddhism, Christ's teaching say "IGNORE the FRUIT OR rewards" in
relationships... AND in worshipping GOD?Truth ... hence, the controversy whether we are saved by Faith or by WORKS ... yet, in relationships there has to be give and take. Yes, the human nature since the Fall is full of "sin" or "desire" and I have yet to see any truly PLATONIC relationship where one side gets NOTHING and remains happy in the realtionship. Good writing, if somewhat palpably disappointing & chagrined by name-calling. Even this will pass, Amen!
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on March 12, 2009 at 10:25 PM
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Sounds like love never took flight!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 12, 2009 at 10:13 PM
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Intense and bitter...
...sometimes makes excellent poetry!
posted by
metalrat
on March 12, 2009 at 8:52 PM
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Sad relationship to endure. believe in you !!

posted by
merkie
on March 12, 2009 at 7:47 PM
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I cannot imagine going through a relationship like that. I would like to think I would be able to leave.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 12, 2009 at 4:17 PM
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posted by
lestate7
on March 12, 2009 at 2:58 PM
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posted by
drohan254
on March 12, 2009 at 8:29 AM
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None of these things are possible without your consent my friend
don't give it! Superb depiction; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on March 12, 2009 at 7:30 AM
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