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Wow Marta I am lost for words!marvellous writing!
posted by
merkie
on March 17, 2009 at 8:26 PM
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The affirmation is outstanding with poignant reflective imagery that is a lesson for all! Well written my dear Sinome! Just wonderful soul searching and understanding and resolution in this imagery! Thinking of you sweetie! sammy
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on March 16, 2009 at 10:02 AM
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beautiful
Sometimes change is for the better
posted by
lionreign
on March 16, 2009 at 6:59 AM
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This is perfect. You excel when you are magnanimous! This is humility personified.
posted by
hardilaziz
on March 16, 2009 at 5:54 AM
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Oh wow how I relate to this my dear Sinome
my train of thought brough me to a make or break stage - one which I am happy to say seems to be working out for the better but time will tell; patience and compromise is probably the best way my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on March 16, 2009 at 5:42 AM
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people do change...sometimes for the better sometimes for the worse...
compromise is the key.
posted by
_Symphony_
on March 16, 2009 at 3:28 AM
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I am trying to refresh a friendship into some love
posted by
Lanetay
on March 15, 2009 at 10:59 PM
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Wow, I'm not really sure whether to feel happy, determined, or trapped! This poem displays all three to me intertwined and deep.
posted by
calia14
on March 15, 2009 at 10:11 PM
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Your expression in your work is just Wow.
posted by
Kabu
on March 15, 2009 at 7:15 PM
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Sinome.. You have such a wonderful way of expressing the pains so common to all of us. Blessings and Peace dear one
posted by
Blue_feathers
on March 15, 2009 at 7:08 PM
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Very powerful. Love that will not cease.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 15, 2009 at 5:51 PM
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what an expression.....
posted by
Star5_
on March 15, 2009 at 5:39 PM
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