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Very vivid! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on March 17, 2009 at 4:25 AM
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Sounds like a breath of fresh air is needed here my friend!
let in the sun and new life begins; superb piece; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on March 17, 2009 at 3:49 AM
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hardilaziz
I could use that warmth here my friend, well written...
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 16, 2009 at 9:19 PM
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open the windows and breath the fresh air it won't bring her but your lung
will feel a whole lot better.
posted by
Kabu
on March 16, 2009 at 9:00 PM
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Get her in there and open up the windows! Very expressive imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 16, 2009 at 8:15 PM
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LOL, to Rumor's comment.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 16, 2009 at 5:28 PM
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hardilaziz, that can be true even when the lady is present....
posted by
Rumor
on March 16, 2009 at 2:41 PM
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the two sides of love!
posted by
merkie
on March 16, 2009 at 10:12 AM
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Beautiful expression indeed ...
posted by
afzal50
on March 16, 2009 at 9:45 AM
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