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The wind whispers surprises! Well done once more!
posted by
merkie
on March 17, 2009 at 8:31 PM
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Fabulous imagery. Very sensitive as well!
posted by
hardilaziz
on March 17, 2009 at 8:11 PM
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sinome
Beautiful!!
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on March 17, 2009 at 12:00 PM
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Did I ever mention
how much I respect your talent? This is evokative and beautiful
posted by
lionreign
on March 17, 2009 at 11:38 AM
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If we listen carefully many things are brought to us by the wind my friend
and you have depicted this so well here; the image is very clear - a superb write Sinome as always; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on March 17, 2009 at 5:16 AM
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One can truly hear the wind through your words; truly beautiful! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on March 17, 2009 at 4:16 AM
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like always very nice work
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on March 16, 2009 at 11:14 PM
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This is a very beautiful, profound and thought provoking poem; like lustorlove I'm not sure I always want to listen to the wind and submit to fate. Thank you for sharing it.
posted by
elinjo
on March 16, 2009 at 10:33 PM
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I will listen but I dont want to be in it
posted by
Lanetay
on March 16, 2009 at 9:58 PM
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I loved the refrain of listen to the wind, it gave the imagery a refreshing ambiance! Such wonderful imagery! Hey my Sinome how are you? sammy
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on March 16, 2009 at 8:56 PM
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I'm with FSI. Recalled "wind" is similar in Hebrew for His Breath/primal
I will listen better, I promise...Shalom
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on March 16, 2009 at 8:43 PM
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I really enjoyed reading this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 16, 2009 at 5:42 PM
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Sinome, the wind tells us many a story, both romantic and otherwise,
if we'll only listen...
..I find the wind has a voice all its own at times
posted by
Rumor
on March 16, 2009 at 3:42 PM
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I write a lot about the wind, as well. there's something so hauntingly
romantic about it. Great poem.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 16, 2009 at 2:53 PM
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I have been listening to wind.................
posted by
Star5_
on March 16, 2009 at 1:06 PM
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