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so sad, yet so lovely.
posted by
Ariala
on March 18, 2009 at 6:24 PM
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Beautiful beyond words
*stands and applauds*
posted by
lionreign
on March 18, 2009 at 3:02 PM
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Lovely poem
as lovely as a kiss by the sea.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on March 18, 2009 at 12:57 PM
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ahhh so very well expressed.......heartfelt.
posted by
_Symphony_
on March 18, 2009 at 4:39 AM
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Utterly fantastic my dear Sinome
the image is so vivid and emotions overflow onto the page; a stupendous write my friend although sad it is still one of life's realities and you have depicted it so well; very well done indeed; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on March 18, 2009 at 4:15 AM
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Wow! This is an outstanding poem! I am speechless! Poignant imagery! sammy
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on March 18, 2009 at 1:53 AM
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Seldom can the happiness of the past be regained once it is lost, other than in memories
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posted by
TAPS.
on March 17, 2009 at 11:34 PM
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Very deeply felt...
I am back again, Marta.
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 17, 2009 at 11:26 PM
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Very deeply felt...
I am back again, Marta.
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 17, 2009 at 11:26 PM
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Very deeply felt...
I am back again, Marta.
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 17, 2009 at 11:26 PM
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Yes, a very beautiful and poignant poem and this line I think is one of the most poignant: 'for loving the right man, at the wrong moment'
posted by
elinjo
on March 17, 2009 at 10:25 PM
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Very beautiful and poignant. God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on March 17, 2009 at 10:20 PM
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Fragile hearts break easy.....as do the seas waves breaking on the shore.
Nice one....
posted by
yellowrose55
on March 17, 2009 at 9:50 PM
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Poignant indeed! from a heart pouring with Love, and the yearning for her beloved being near who could comfort and who she could comfort. You are a beautiful one my princess Marta xoxoxo
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 17, 2009 at 9:21 PM
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Poignant wishes Marta... tugging the heart strings..
posted by
merkie
on March 17, 2009 at 8:33 PM
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Sinome
'If you were here' we could tell you how wonderful a poet and writer you are and we just love you
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 17, 2009 at 8:33 PM
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Beautiful! Well done, Sinome.
posted by
myrrhage
on March 17, 2009 at 8:24 PM
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This was so sad you brought the tears to my eyes and I had to pop
across the room and hug my Wiley.
posted by
Kabu
on March 17, 2009 at 8:22 PM
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so much real love
posted by
Lanetay
on March 17, 2009 at 8:21 PM
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Your love is genuine and it shows always!
posted by
hardilaziz
on March 17, 2009 at 8:16 PM
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Very touching and poignant.
posted by
metalrat
on March 17, 2009 at 7:07 PM
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WOW, Sinome. This is my favorite of yours, thus far, and I love them all.
Really deep and touching. Beautiful.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 17, 2009 at 6:29 PM
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oh now I am going to cry...
posted by
Blue_feathers
on March 17, 2009 at 6:04 PM
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"loneliness is a harsh punishment for loving the right man at the wrong
moment"....Ioften wonder what would have happened if a teenage sweetheart (before Liz came along) had not been swept away from me by someone close to being my best friend at the time....I still wonder, and I guess I always will...
...
posted by
Rumor
on March 17, 2009 at 4:53 PM
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Happy St. Patrick's Day.
I cannot imagine what it is like when a significant other is not there anymore.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 17, 2009 at 4:14 PM
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