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posted by
Star5_
on March 20, 2009 at 7:00 PM
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I get the chronic smoke problem...Excellent poetry!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 19, 2009 at 10:29 PM
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Powerful words! I really like the last stamza! Well done!
posted by
merkie
on March 19, 2009 at 10:33 AM
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Stunning imagery! Wow! So expressive and a very powerful message! I am with Sinome too! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 19, 2009 at 8:46 AM
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Poignant and heartfelt... Your poetry is growing and growing in expression Less... Loved it!
posted by
Sinome
on March 19, 2009 at 5:24 AM
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Beautifully written...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 19, 2009 at 4:51 AM
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