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ATOUCHING POEM
posted by
drohan254
on March 27, 2009 at 12:12 AM
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Stunning work, Sinome!!

posted by
myrrhage
on March 26, 2009 at 7:24 PM
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I also can't believe that sometimes love just ends!
posted by
Straightforward
on March 26, 2009 at 7:12 PM
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(S)awesome as usual
posted by
lestate7
on March 26, 2009 at 4:51 PM
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A beautiful but sad poem.
The changing of the seasons of one's life is always hard to bear.
posted by
muley12
on March 26, 2009 at 4:23 PM
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Cool idea to talk about how to stop loving must be/feel like only to end with saying it won't happen.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 26, 2009 at 4:01 PM
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Stunning similes! I think it wonderful the resolve at the close of the poem! I love you missy! sammy


I just saw my e-mail! Stunning! So beautiful! So very beautiful! I will write soon, promise!
posted by
sam444
on March 26, 2009 at 2:56 PM
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Sinome
You leave me breathless and I was so happy to reach the end when you chose not to believe what “they” tell you…..
posted by
Troosha
on March 26, 2009 at 11:12 AM
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I know your sentiment by now. Your love is precious and timeless.
posted by
hardilaziz
on March 26, 2009 at 9:13 AM
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Very beautiful indeed, and the ending is so powerful.
posted by
Nita09
on March 26, 2009 at 3:37 AM
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hello marta
I hope you do indeed never have the experience of not loving someone anymore. It's very strange. The saddest thing is that you feel like you never loved them in the first place. Then comes the forgetting ....
posted by
GingerTyme
on March 26, 2009 at 12:12 AM
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Superb.....people do give up to easily. Sinome, loved the way you ended this poem.

posted by
yellowrose55
on March 25, 2009 at 11:16 PM
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Very nicely written, Marta...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 25, 2009 at 10:50 PM
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The paper boat always sinks!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 25, 2009 at 9:39 PM
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