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The you shining through EXcellent !
posted by
merkie
on April 5, 2009 at 9:13 AM
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WOw Less... that poem is fantastic... truly outstanding my friend :-)
posted by
Sinome
on April 3, 2009 at 3:43 PM
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You never lack depth of thinking… then you just pour it all out there!
posted by
Troosha
on March 30, 2009 at 7:17 AM
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You keep going....great poem!
posted by
CRShelley
on March 28, 2009 at 10:01 PM
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excellent. very awesome poem.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 28, 2009 at 6:24 PM
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First, Osiris, I love you and will love you forever!!! I was thinking earlier today I had not read a poem using onomatopoeia! I love the tic toc, then the poem read like a prose poem and that was glorious! Then to wrap with the Book of Life and and that the Lord will handle judgment is superb! I am going to read this after I leave my comment because it is loaded with fabulous thoughts and poignant truth! I am so proud of you!!!!! Honestly, the depth of your thoughts in all of your poetry just elates me and I always leave feeling like I have had a glimpse into a poet's soul! sam 
Thank you for the wonderful comment too!!!!!
posted by
sam444
on March 28, 2009 at 6:12 PM
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