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Excellent rewrite.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 30, 2009 at 5:13 PM
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I love your view. The Macy’s parade’s being moved to Sixth Avenue for pedestrian squares in Times Square love. BCA, Bill*s Roost
posted by
BC-A
on March 30, 2009 at 2:01 PM
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Great, especially...
The arrogance of mankind makes them look bright
posted by
Sudanym_
on March 30, 2009 at 12:34 PM
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Sinome
Glad you “polished off” an old poem (which probably didn’t require much polishing). It breathes of any big city. Nicely done!
posted by
Troosha
on March 30, 2009 at 11:10 AM
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It's simply beautiful .
posted by
afzal50
on March 30, 2009 at 9:19 AM
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beautifully written
so alive and vivid... although I really never want to go to a city so large
posted by
lionreign
on March 30, 2009 at 8:55 AM
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I can picture the buildings, through your vivid descriptions. Thanks for a glimpse of NYC! Thanks for for your comment on my post---we'd love to have you as a citizen! but till then, do visit us at least---you'd be most welcome! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on March 30, 2009 at 8:07 AM
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A fine piece of writing Sinome
excellent imagery reviving my hazy memory of a visit there so long ago; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on March 30, 2009 at 5:31 AM
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You captured the feel of New York so perfectly :)
posted by
calia14
on March 30, 2009 at 12:06 AM
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Perfect...
Capturing the moment as you live it is a great poetic tool. I can picture it pretty much as I imagine you saw it.
posted by
food4thought
on March 29, 2009 at 9:21 PM
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Sinome
A beautiful poem. It's been a while since I was last in NYC, but you make me want to visit again...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 29, 2009 at 7:04 PM
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Such a great poem my Sinome! I loved the imagery! You captured it very well! sammy loves you!!!
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on March 29, 2009 at 4:09 PM
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very nice and sad at the same time
posted by
Lanetay
on March 29, 2009 at 10:38 AM
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ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT, my friend. xoxooxox
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 29, 2009 at 10:16 AM
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