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That's what I wonder, Maryka77.
Thanks for reading this.
posted by
SpitFire70
on April 25, 2009 at 5:36 PM
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...A part of her not whole...
Very nice.
posted by
Maryka77
on April 25, 2009 at 4:13 PM
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Thanks, StraightF,
I hope it didn't upset you, though. My mom (adoptive mom) died 2 years ago. I miss her terribly and she will always be my only mother. This was written for my birth mother. Thank you for reading it. 
posted by
SpitFire70
on April 6, 2009 at 12:31 PM
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This is touching and it just made me remember my mum who is no more
posted by
Straightforward
on April 6, 2009 at 10:07 AM
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Thanks so much for those kind words, yellowrose!
posted by
SpitFire70
on April 4, 2009 at 12:30 PM
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Such deeply moving thoughts are pouring out in your poem, so beautifully written. From the heart.....

Experiencing this must be heartbreaking.
posted by
yellowrose55
on April 4, 2009 at 12:19 PM
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That's so sweet of you to say, mariposa75
Thank you!
posted by
SpitFire70
on April 2, 2009 at 11:56 PM
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I'm sure she does. A mother can never forget a child born to them.
posted by
mariposa75
on April 2, 2009 at 3:52 PM
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Thanks, Sam. Yeah, I think
becoming a mom helps me understand a bit better. It's still hard not to wonder about her.
posted by
SpitFire70
on April 2, 2009 at 12:51 PM
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Happy belated birthday! You are a Mom and I know you know the answer even though you wonder! There is an eternal bond in my humble opinion! There is for me! sam


VEry well written too!
posted by
sam444
on April 2, 2009 at 11:55 AM
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I hope so, hardilaziz. Thank you very much!
posted by
SpitFire70
on April 2, 2009 at 10:53 AM
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Re: also - Happy birthday xx
Thank you, Symph!! 

posted by
SpitFire70
on April 2, 2009 at 10:53 AM
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Thanks for that, merkie
posted by
SpitFire70
on April 2, 2009 at 10:52 AM
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There's no doubt she feels for you as much as you do for her!
posted by
hardilaziz
on April 1, 2009 at 9:24 PM
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also - Happy birthday xx
posted by
_Symphony_
on April 1, 2009 at 1:38 PM
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wonderfully written.....
posted by
_Symphony_
on April 1, 2009 at 1:37 PM
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As a mom I don't think you could forget ,no matter what!
posted by
merkie
on April 1, 2009 at 12:50 PM
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Thanks Timmy!
posted by
SpitFire70
on April 1, 2009 at 11:12 AM
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Thanks Teddy.
And I understand what you're saying. It is still hard not to wonder. I always wonder about it the most on my birthday, though.
posted by
SpitFire70
on April 1, 2009 at 11:12 AM
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spiffy
Wow....this is very very good!!
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on April 1, 2009 at 11:11 AM
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Deep inside I think you know the answer, Dear 'fire...







Stunning illustration of Heart, my friend!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 1, 2009 at 11:10 AM
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Thanks Kayzzaman!
posted by
SpitFire70
on April 1, 2009 at 10:56 AM
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Very well done...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on April 1, 2009 at 2:28 AM
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