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I am amazed at your concise verse, and the effortless grace with which you pack a nuclear punch into it
posted by
lionreign
on April 3, 2009 at 10:35 AM
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Complacency invariably brings terrible news.
posted by
hardilaziz
on April 2, 2009 at 6:50 PM
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as always, hard-hitting and oh! so crisp. hats off to you.
posted by
bythewindowsill
on April 2, 2009 at 8:11 AM
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How you manage to say so much with so little words by dear Ash
always amazes me! Excellent piece as always my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on April 2, 2009 at 5:16 AM
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posted by
shobana
on April 2, 2009 at 1:14 AM
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Iwas the second best swimmer in my village...but I was the brightest! Meaning....it takes brains to pilot through life!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 1, 2009 at 11:19 PM
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AsH....you always got a good topic
posted by
Star5_
on April 1, 2009 at 6:57 PM
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ash, one can fall asleep, drifting aimlessly in this complacency
and suddenly find themselves in a heap of troubles....
posted by
Rumor
on April 1, 2009 at 4:04 PM
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wow great writing.
and thanks for the welcome back :~)
posted by
_Symphony_
on April 1, 2009 at 1:50 PM
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Indeed, swimming is better than drowning!
posted by
merkie
on April 1, 2009 at 12:27 PM
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Profound!
posted by
metalrat
on April 1, 2009 at 12:25 PM
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Excellent !!
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 1, 2009 at 12:22 PM
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Ash
The “pool” of complacence is a danger place to swim….
posted by
Troosha
on April 1, 2009 at 11:54 AM
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Yes, too many complacent people. They are even worse than those who hate, I think, because they can do something and don't. Mal
posted by
gapcohen
on April 1, 2009 at 11:45 AM
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Awesome poem. So many people fit that description.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 1, 2009 at 11:40 AM
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Notice how the animals sense a tsunami before us humans do :)? - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on April 1, 2009 at 11:29 AM
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