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Master Piece Of Soliditude! Profound deepness clash heartfelt strong willed
posted by
Mystereo
on April 26, 2009 at 5:57 AM
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And slowly the sun will start to warm you again. Wow this says it all! Shredded world of sorrow!
posted by
merkie
on April 13, 2009 at 9:53 AM
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so deep rooted and poignant Lauren..
posted by
shobana
on April 12, 2009 at 9:06 PM
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Outstanding contrasts! I like the flow as I read it aloud! KUDOS! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 12, 2009 at 4:19 PM
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The "paint brushes with no color on their tips" touched my heart.
How sad that is for one who is compelled to paint their world, their life, to be repressed from doing so for lack of anything--be it tangible, spiritual, emotional, grief.....
This is quite a work you have here. As teddypoet said, "haunting".
posted by
TAPS.
on April 12, 2009 at 9:42 AM
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Haunting...excellent!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 11, 2009 at 10:28 PM
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