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Very evocative, specially
the breeze brings me scents of my far away home
while the cold in the air cuts through my thoughts like a knife. God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on April 15, 2009 at 7:03 AM
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You give a different point of view on April. In example you use the imagery of the sea and the night instead of flowers and cute little bunnies. BCA, Bill*s Roost
posted by
BC-A
on April 14, 2009 at 2:31 PM
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Sinome, You captured my attention with this amazing poem. I watched the vivid imagery unfold and enjoyed every last word. Blessings!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on April 14, 2009 at 2:12 PM
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posted by
_Twins
on April 14, 2009 at 7:29 AM
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Oh the beauty of this fine piece Sinome!
stupendous imagery and excellent ending my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on April 14, 2009 at 4:13 AM
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Loved the imagery, and the evocative words draws one to the heart-felt feelings
xoxoxo
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 13, 2009 at 11:27 PM
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Just beautiful...
Whether it's wind, rain or shine, I miss walking on beach.
posted by
yellowrose55
on April 13, 2009 at 9:47 PM
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That's obviously the better half!
posted by
hardilaziz
on April 13, 2009 at 8:40 PM
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Wow! Wonderful imagery with a very thought provoking and evocative ending my dear Sinome! Wonderful! Love you! sammy
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on April 13, 2009 at 5:08 PM
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Very, very Lovely !!
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 13, 2009 at 4:50 PM
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I'm getting impatient now for spring.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 13, 2009 at 3:49 PM
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That is a very lovely poem Sinome! Thank you for visiting me and leaving your comment.
posted by
elinjo
on April 13, 2009 at 2:26 PM
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very lovely
posted by
Lanetay
on April 13, 2009 at 2:11 PM
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