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Wow... brilliant, shocking, and uniquely written.
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 15, 2009 at 8:22 AM
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Human nature at its best, you really blew my mind with this profound write!
posted by
Mystereo
on May 5, 2009 at 2:41 PM
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..I also know you don't ..
Extremely well said...Kathy
posted by
Maryka77
on May 2, 2009 at 10:21 PM
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Isn't it amazing how much our own hearts and confidence shakes in the shadow of another's? When they're too confident, too calm, too loving, too understanding...we doubt and we begin to question so much...we want so much to test how far those waters will go...
Loved the poem. It made me think so much
posted by
NiteTide
on April 20, 2009 at 10:11 PM
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I can so relate to this - it beggars belief how someone can re-focus their energies with such apparent ease. I hope things improve..
posted by
mneme
on April 20, 2009 at 6:35 AM
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straight, love is not predictable at times, give a chance, you might find
the best in life......
posted by
Star5_
on April 17, 2009 at 8:42 PM
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Harsh
posted by
calia14
on April 17, 2009 at 6:19 PM
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I like the reversal in this
cleverly done - it has a lot of impact.
posted by
lionreign
on April 17, 2009 at 3:25 AM
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A love who cannot be moved is no love at all.
He/she has truely lost it and cares not to find it again.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 16, 2009 at 8:16 AM
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I guess, just take people as they come... sorry you were disappointed. Some are far gone enough not care to about anything at all!
posted by
mariss9
on April 16, 2009 at 8:02 AM
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A kick to the Heart, my friend...very well done!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 15, 2009 at 11:34 PM
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Can I call it love with detachment?
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 15, 2009 at 11:32 PM
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EXCELLENT !
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 15, 2009 at 7:10 AM
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Wow! That is one stubborn person! Striking imagery too! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 15, 2009 at 7:05 AM
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~ you touched my heart with this one
posted by
Blue_feathers
on April 15, 2009 at 4:03 AM
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