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Ah, I feel restored. Reading your poem is such an invigorating feeling. Lines so full of emotion, I feel each one like a new layer of clothing. Simply beautiful and heartbreakingly lovely. I have definitely missed your wonderful verse.
P.S. I left a message/reply for you on my poem! 
posted by
NiteTide
on April 21, 2009 at 6:48 PM
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Intense love there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 21, 2009 at 4:54 PM
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sinome
Beautiful!!!
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on April 21, 2009 at 2:29 PM
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posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 21, 2009 at 9:39 AM
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Aah in the shelter of your heart you find beautiful inspiration to share. BCA, Bill*s Ro
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posted by
BC-A
on April 21, 2009 at 9:37 AM
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You make me wonder what my last though will be when I leave this life--probably something like, "I wonder if I turned off the coffee pot."
Very nice!
posted by
TAPS.
on April 21, 2009 at 7:22 AM
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It's so passionate and truthful expression .
posted by
afzal50
on April 21, 2009 at 5:37 AM
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Hmnnnn! Was it the first love?
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 20, 2009 at 11:43 PM
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So amazingly beautiful....I'm always in awe and enjoy reading your poems so much Sinome.
posted by
yellowrose55
on April 20, 2009 at 11:12 PM
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You was such a lovely poem amazing. thankyou for your comment and you are right. our troubles do fester if they are not dealt with. some take time to go away. The spider is a long standing character a very close friend has written with me about her. If you get a chance to read spider and the fly you will understand where I write from and where the troubles tribulations love and confusion are all mixed up. Writing about them is one way of expressing our frustrations and when we get to the end of the poem hopefully we will be able to write the end.
posted by
spiderfly
on April 20, 2009 at 10:59 PM
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how nice
posted by
Lanetay
on April 20, 2009 at 9:48 PM
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Priceless, so beautiful. You are always such a delight to read.
posted by
Kabu
on April 20, 2009 at 9:45 PM
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Marta
"You who I have adored,
and for whom I have sinned"!!! Fantastic my lovely princess. Here's are
s and xoxoxos for you.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 20, 2009 at 9:43 PM
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Beautiful, as usual, Marta...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on April 20, 2009 at 9:13 PM
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