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Poignant verses my friend filled with just anger and compassion for the suffering of the less fortunate. It reflects your heart Kaizz, Great work my friend
posted by
Sinome
on April 21, 2009 at 7:08 PM
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Incredibly powerful.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 21, 2009 at 5:20 PM
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Warm and touched my heart.
posted by
BrightIrish
on April 21, 2009 at 5:14 PM
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Bring Down The House! Word can not express how the poem struck my mind.
posted by
Mystereo
on April 21, 2009 at 3:55 PM
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… when ready taught …
… onerous misdeeds never cease ...
… on the streets, really no-fault ...
But if you care, share. BCA, Bill*s Roost
posted by
BC-A
on April 21, 2009 at 9:44 AM
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It makes me think of the times of Victor Hugo's
Les Miserables.
I think he would be sad, yet not surprised, to know that slums and poverty were still an epidemic of this earth even in this modern age.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 21, 2009 at 7:30 AM
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Great Poem
A lot to think about. Love it. 
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 21, 2009 at 6:56 AM
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Powerful and passionate !!
posted by
afzal50
on April 21, 2009 at 5:35 AM
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Touching a much ignored topic.............
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on April 21, 2009 at 4:49 AM
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This is like a tribute to the street people! I feel for them!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 20, 2009 at 11:42 PM
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kayzzaman
Very powerful and heart-felt. I'll come back to read this again.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 20, 2009 at 10:35 PM
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So deeply felt Kayzzaman
posted by
shobana
on April 20, 2009 at 10:13 PM
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