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So sad..seems they're staying together mainly for Sarah.



posted by
yellowrose55
on June 7, 2009 at 6:39 PM
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elinjo
Enjoy your guests Betty and share this lovely writing with them too maybe....
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 21, 2009 at 11:07 PM
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Gotta get the time to stop and catch up on what I've missed.
posted by
janey_
on April 21, 2009 at 10:43 PM
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I am so involved with this couple. What started out with such joy and hope
has become so sad. Yes this was a time when you didn't divorce and women couldn't get any help anyway. That was still some years off. I feel so sorry for the child. great writing see you have me really hooked.
posted by
Kabu
on April 21, 2009 at 10:00 PM
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What a superb writer you are, Betty. Now I must see for the missing links.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 21, 2009 at 9:48 PM
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I'm worried about their marriage.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 21, 2009 at 4:49 PM
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Enjoy your guests' visit and thank you for dropping by and leaving your kind comment Nita. All the best!
posted by
elinjo
on April 21, 2009 at 11:47 AM
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Betty, this is so engrossing! I've had a wonderful time catching up on the last three chapters, and just waiting for you to be back with the next one! I too have guests, so will catch up with you soon! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on April 21, 2009 at 11:29 AM
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elinjo
This is a great story, looking forward to tomorrows installment!!
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on April 21, 2009 at 10:58 AM
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Thanks Taps, when I started writing this I did not realize I'd keep going this long, but it's got hold of me too. So far about 44 pages!
posted by
elinjo
on April 21, 2009 at 9:53 AM
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enjoy yourself, see you when we see you
posted by
Lanetay
on April 21, 2009 at 8:50 AM
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I like this so well that I am thinking about starting all over again and reading all at once. I've never liked the short starts and stops that we get in small pieces on Blogit. I like reading a book straight through to the end, even when it goes to the wee hours of the morning.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 21, 2009 at 7:57 AM
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I am reading ...
posted by
afzal50
on April 21, 2009 at 5:39 AM
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Nice, very nice...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on April 21, 2009 at 4:40 AM
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