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posted by
mysteria
on May 24, 2009 at 11:55 AM
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My friend, this is an amazingly insightful piece of writing.
posted by
Chilitree
on May 2, 2009 at 3:39 AM
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Yes we should take responsibility for ourselves and not blame others.
posted by
elinjo
on May 1, 2009 at 12:00 PM
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I love a day that's filled with new-found freedoms!
posted by
Ciel
on April 30, 2009 at 10:59 AM
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Superb write!
Excellent and very insightful metaphor; well done indeed; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on April 30, 2009 at 2:50 AM
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Lotus Flower
It is your deep metaphorical significances of 'not you' and 'but I' that I just simply loved. Very well done!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 29, 2009 at 11:54 PM
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Well expressed !!
posted by
afzal50
on April 29, 2009 at 8:57 PM
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You are absolutely right!
"I have seen the enemy, and it is I."
posted by
metalrat
on April 29, 2009 at 4:42 PM
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This poem was written very well - because in the fewest words it teaches the largest lesson. Nothing ever holds us back as much as we hold ourselves back.
posted by
NiteTide
on April 29, 2009 at 1:28 PM
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posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 29, 2009 at 1:00 PM
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so well said and it is so true, we are our own captors
posted by
spiderfly
on April 29, 2009 at 11:51 AM
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This is fabulous! KUDOS!!!!! I need to take stock as well! Such awesome imagery, the kind that stays! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 29, 2009 at 11:43 AM
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Beyond joyous, what a good read, lovely concept and true.
posted by
benzinha
on April 29, 2009 at 10:59 AM
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...was me all along....
Well written and wise.
Kathy
posted by
Maryka77
on April 29, 2009 at 10:59 AM
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