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...crushing my existence ....
Painful to hear...but beautifully written.
Kathy
posted by
Maryka77
on May 8, 2009 at 10:16 PM
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WOW! that touched me on many different emotional levels.
posted by
muley12
on May 1, 2009 at 5:00 PM
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I find time the traffic light of life love. BCA, Bill*s Roost
posted by
BC-A
on May 1, 2009 at 2:57 PM
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is this suppose to be sad?
posted by
Lanetay
on May 1, 2009 at 8:39 AM
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Wow!!
This is incredible - the timing and wording of this have enormous impact... I am off to read it again
posted by
lionreign
on May 1, 2009 at 4:45 AM
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I love the "waves fall on their face" imagery! Thanks for stopping in to read my blog and commenting, Yellow....Mal
posted by
gapcohen
on May 1, 2009 at 4:41 AM
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Very lovely and sensitive!
posted by
elinjo
on May 1, 2009 at 2:30 AM
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intruiging and one has to read it several times as it is so well written.
posted by
Kabu
on April 30, 2009 at 10:08 PM
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Very nice imagery yellowrose! KUDOS! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 30, 2009 at 9:44 PM
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yellowrose
What a different style it was from you, intense and so sensuous
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 30, 2009 at 9:38 PM
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Wow! Very intense and poignant!
I've felt like that before.
posted by
metalrat
on April 30, 2009 at 6:15 PM
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I like this a lot.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 30, 2009 at 4:26 PM
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Well said -I like the acceptance and the road with no end -where the goal resides!Victory Vicky!
posted by
merkie
on April 30, 2009 at 12:33 PM
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Ohmy, I'm a little lost here.
At the end. ., and this is silly. ., but I think/thought you were speaking of Beach Bums.
(sigh) I'm horrible at interpretting poetry!!
posted by
Joe_Love
on April 30, 2009 at 12:07 AM
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The bums are the heroes...they survived from zero!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 29, 2009 at 11:16 PM
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A very interesting and intricate working of verse!
posted by
NiteTide
on April 29, 2009 at 11:08 PM
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Very cool...love the last line!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 29, 2009 at 9:49 PM
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Intriguing and poignant. Great work
posted by
Sinome
on April 29, 2009 at 9:14 PM
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