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Awesome work!
posted by
calia14
on May 2, 2009 at 5:02 PM
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lestate
in this blink of a eye called life chasing love
You come up with some outstanding lines!!!!!! And your work is always so raw and powerful.
posted by
Troosha
on May 1, 2009 at 7:47 AM
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This was an inspiring poem in shape, form, and words. Thank you so much for sharing!
posted by
NiteTide
on May 1, 2009 at 12:29 AM
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Beautiful... I love the shape this makes too.. and I like rainbows.
posted by
mneme
on May 1, 2009 at 12:02 AM
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I enjoyed this!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 30, 2009 at 11:08 PM
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Less!!!! This is fabulous... amazing! You are those rainbows others chase my friend you often tell others they ARE poetry but in truth you are... because you are the real thing my friend :-) I am so proud to know you :-)
posted by
Sinome
on April 30, 2009 at 8:05 PM
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I like your running style of writing. Chasing rainbows we are!
posted by
merkie
on April 30, 2009 at 7:33 PM
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This is a mind blowing read for all attention is trapped between the lines!
posted by
Mystereo
on April 30, 2009 at 6:36 PM
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This is fabulous imagery! I got your e-mail and I will get an answer back today! But, I have my poems selected and will discuss more in my mail! So nice to read you! I was in Houston and an trying to catch up on my reading! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 30, 2009 at 5:57 PM
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