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I don't know how funny this was supposed to be but I laughed out loud after I read it. Loved it!
posted by
squippy
on May 19, 2009 at 4:24 PM
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Oh my gawd!!!! This was great! Shocking as Less says ... but great
posted by
Sinome
on May 3, 2009 at 8:11 AM
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Oh my gawd!!!! This was great! Shocking as Less says ... but great
posted by
Sinome
on May 3, 2009 at 8:11 AM
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What fabulous imagery and what a great end! It shocked me, no pun intended, and I loved it! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 3, 2009 at 6:30 AM
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Also shocked when I read this!
A plugged in
Electrical cord in the tub he inserts......
(I think you should replace the words "Electrical cord" with "vibrator.")
I think it would be better for their relationship. Just a friendly suggestion!
Thanks for your comments on my poem...
Jonathan aka "Raphael"
posted by
Raphael222
on May 3, 2009 at 2:06 AM
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ohhh ouch
posted by
spiderfly
on May 3, 2009 at 12:33 AM
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Nice poem. What's shocking though?
posted by
Straightforward
on May 2, 2009 at 10:56 PM
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posted by
Chilitree
on May 2, 2009 at 10:03 PM
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shocked! great piece 
posted by
lestate7
on May 2, 2009 at 2:26 PM
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