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A lot going on there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 4, 2009 at 4:45 PM
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Gorgeous expression of anger and pain
Beautifully written, but I hope your sleep took you closer to Heaven or at least further from Hell
posted by
lionreign
on May 4, 2009 at 6:30 AM
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Sad and I detect slightly angry attitude here my friend
I hope you were true to your self and slept well Sinome; very well phrased; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on May 4, 2009 at 3:31 AM
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you are so fly it's crazy! I love your style in
every way!
posted by
lestate7
on May 4, 2009 at 1:58 AM
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GOODNIGHT & I WONDER DO YOU THINK OF US
EMOTIONAL AND ELEGANT AS ALWAYS.HAVE ENJOYED YOUR PROSE IMMENSELY.STAY TRUE TO YOUR WRITING.I HAD TO CANCEL FOR A WHILE,BUT HOPE TO BE BACK AFTER A BRIEF STAY IN THE HOSPITAL.GOD BLESS.RAY(SONGS)
posted by
raywords
on May 4, 2009 at 1:38 AM
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Well expressed...and I wish you sweet dreams that will filter into
your reality. 
posted by
Chilitree
on May 3, 2009 at 11:37 PM
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Disturbing thoughts well brought out Sinome. Great Job.
posted by
shobana
on May 3, 2009 at 10:33 PM
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...and the end leaves us to wonder if the speaker will dream of the one she did not want to think of to begin with. Again, a wonderful poem, Marta. This one was heart wrenching this time - but still beautiful. This is amazing.
posted by
NiteTide
on May 3, 2009 at 10:10 PM
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