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Poignant and thought provoking! I can feel the glee of heaven's gateand the sadness of a job left undone! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 15, 2009 at 7:42 PM
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Lonely but nothing to fear at Heaven's gate!
posted by
hardilaziz
on May 13, 2009 at 9:01 AM
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very nice
Always when I pray I think today is my last prayer. A very good feeling of fulfillment.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on May 13, 2009 at 8:50 AM
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Haunting...excellent!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 12, 2009 at 10:24 PM
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Oh My..... poetry profound .
posted by
tessmae
on May 12, 2009 at 10:24 PM
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You are a beautiful poet, Shobona...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 12, 2009 at 10:20 PM
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A kudos to Shobs. I'll one day tell you the story of Yayati.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 12, 2009 at 9:37 PM
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some sad.....but your writing is exceptional...
posted by
Star5_
on May 12, 2009 at 9:14 PM
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It's a cliff-hanger of an ending for me....so heart breaking to read....
posted by
NiteTide
on May 12, 2009 at 9:09 PM
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Shobana
I like your style luv, good thoughts to entertain here.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 12, 2009 at 8:30 PM
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I like seeing writing about this. It's not that common anymore. Very well done. It also creates a few questions and reminds us that God does have a plan for us.
posted by
Toastpcs
on May 12, 2009 at 8:02 PM
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