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Extremely intense.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 16, 2009 at 5:45 PM
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Very interesting line, "
A child in lap never tranquilises the trauma of worse days."
It set me to trying to remember what it was like when I was that age. I can remember sitting on my daddy's lap in church. I think you may be right about that line.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 15, 2009 at 9:11 PM
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So much of comfort in this poem Kayzzaman
posted by
shobana
on May 15, 2009 at 6:59 PM
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intense!!! wow. it could well be the strange moment i am in right now, but i shudder to think of what else can come out from behind that stone wall of silence.
and thankyou for the visit my side and kind comment on there - do come by again 
posted by
bythewindowsill
on May 15, 2009 at 2:06 PM
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Succinct and profound !
posted by
afzal50
on May 15, 2009 at 11:46 AM
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You put perception into emotion. BCA, BillJRoost
posted by
BC-A
on May 15, 2009 at 10:25 AM
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Very interesting rerad. Time seems to have no color. Enjoyed your poem.
posted by
michaudblaine
on May 15, 2009 at 9:46 AM
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Interesting and soul-searching
But where are the colours to paint the timelessness?
I humbly suggest they are in your heart...where the Creator of all Life resides and who, with your unique contribution, creates a beautiful reality.
posted by
Raphael222
on May 15, 2009 at 8:43 AM
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Awesome...how the world is ..
posted by
mariss9
on May 15, 2009 at 7:54 AM
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