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Excellent message!
posted by
merkie
on May 18, 2009 at 12:02 PM
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I think this is great courage in adversity! The poem is very depictive of the events! So poignant indeed! It just goes to show what determination can do in the most dire of circumstances! Did you witness this by any chance? sam
posted by
sam444
on May 18, 2009 at 8:53 AM
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Very poignant, Shobana…. 
posted by
Troosha
on May 18, 2009 at 7:35 AM
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Re: Nitetide
Yeah, it is quite sad isn't it but he's got his priorities right and that will get him where he wants to go..Aww come on.. don't be so sad - ok?
posted by
shobana
on May 17, 2009 at 7:43 PM
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Was I wrong to read this in sadness? The image of the boy singing for his food is such a heartbreaking sight that I couldn't help read the rest of the poem in such a sad light. And yet, the strength of the boy, his determination, and optimism also seeps out of your poem...and my heart doesn't ache as much as I smile at the tenacity of one so young.
posted by
NiteTide
on May 17, 2009 at 7:39 PM
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so cool.....
posted by
Star5_
on May 17, 2009 at 7:12 PM
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