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posted by
Samantha39
on May 20, 2009 at 7:21 PM
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I enjoyed that piece!
posted by
tamlet
on May 20, 2009 at 6:38 PM
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I love it the way it is.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 20, 2009 at 2:53 PM
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Thank you Sinome and others Kazzyman etc who liked the poem
It gives one a lift to think of others reading and liking the work. Chuffed.
posted by
Norwood
on May 20, 2009 at 1:48 PM
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Oh it was spelt correctly
I thought it might have been spelt 'rainment' which sometimes happens. I thought I'd made a typo. I get very insecure in my competence in all things these days.
posted by
Norwood
on May 20, 2009 at 1:46 PM
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Hi vogue
Raiment means dress or clothing and I have to go back and do a spell check. Thank you for picking that up. The old eyes get tired.
posted by
Norwood
on May 20, 2009 at 1:44 PM
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This is quite nice, but please tell me: what is raiment?
posted by
vogue
on May 20, 2009 at 9:15 AM
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Loved the visual images. You paint us a wonderful canvas and fill it with feelings... Great work!
posted by
Sinome
on May 20, 2009 at 5:55 AM
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Very good imagery used here, well done...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 20, 2009 at 4:36 AM
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Very good imagery used here, well done...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 20, 2009 at 4:36 AM
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There were certain piecesof imagery in that, that sucked me in.
posted by
scarlet_raven
on May 20, 2009 at 3:15 AM
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